Dairo-haram ke muaamle, insaan ke haath pad gae, Jang hai kiraaedaaron me, Maalik-makaan daraa milaa

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Yesterday at 1:50am | Edit Note | Delete

Jo chaahiye nahin milaa,
Jo chaahiye nahin milaa,

Jaddo-jahad me zindagi
kuchh is tarahan katatee gai,
Jaise ho gandi naali men,
paanee kaa koi bulbulaa

Jo chaahiye nahin milaa,

Sabko khushi ki chaah hai,
Lab pe magar ek aah hai,
Har aadamin udaas hai,
Har aadamin hai dil-jala......

Jo chaahiye nahin milaa,

Ghar me jalaa ke maar den,
kyaa-kyaa sahen ye betiyaan,
Vo kothon pe chadh jaaengi,
Jinako naa koi ghar milaa....

Jo chaahiye nahin milaa,

Baarish ki chaahaten liye
Dikhaa kiye jo aasamaaN
Unaki fasal ko falaq se,
Olon kaa tohafaa milaa....

Jo chaahiye nahin milaa,

Dairo-haram ke muaamle,
insaan ke haath pad gae,
Jang hai kiraaedaaron me,
Maalik-makaan daraa milaa

Jo chaahiye nahin milaa.

@ kaynat

Updated 22 hours ago · Comment ·

Kamal Kishore, Aparajita Krishna and 2 others like this.

Dharmendra Nath Ojha

wowwww ! bahut khub...Shayar ka dil hi aisa hai...apni dil ki zameen par puri insaniyat ke liye fasal ugata hai...sabke dil ki aawaaz hai ye...!

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Neerushaa Nikhat

kaynat its beautiful.wooooooooooooooo.....

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Kaynat Kousar

Hi Dharmendra, Aapko yahaan dekh kar achchha lagaa.swaagat.
is khobsoorat comment ke liye shukriyaa.

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Kaynat Kousar

Thanks.Neerushaa. kuchh aur bhi apnaa likhaa tag karen Pls..

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Neerushaa Nikhat

are hum full time wriyer nahi yaar
24 hour costume me busy hai ...per jald hi kuchh aur apki nazar ..........

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Nikky Dahl

achha hai...chaahat na milne ka gila kyon?? yeh to sirf kahanion mein hua karta hai...aakhri band bahut khoob hai...dair-o-haram wala,,,

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Kaynat Kousar

sir ji..Aadaab. kahaaniyaan zindagi se hi banatee hain.
aur insaan badaa asantusht praani. khair..
aakhari band pasand karane ke liye shukriyaa.

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Mohammad Ahsaan

this is great poetry that flows so well with all it's depth and philosphy, very well rhymed and music sounding. i really admire.
to my humble understanding, the reference of makaan maalik and kiraaedaar in the last two lines , lightens the seriouness and diginity of the poem and better be substituted with ideas that suit the over all mood of the poem.

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Kaynat Kousar

Ahsan bhai....shukriya.....aap ko kavitaa achchhi lagi.kavitaa puraani hai...akhari bandh kal raat hi soojhaa.

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seekh paagal prem karanaa. @ kaynat

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Monday, November 9, 2009 at 2:57am | Edit Note | Delete

Seekh paagal,
prem karana........
yahi hai prem............

bade- bade kuchh....
vaade karana.....
qasmen khaana........
aahen bharnaa........

neh lagaanaa.........
moh badhana.......
khoob uksaana.......
phir ukataana.......

mauqaa paakar ,
raah badalna.........
seekh paagal,
prem karana.......
yahi hai prem.

@ kaynat.

Updated about a week ago · Comment ·

Aparajita Krishna, Riju Bajaj, Baanee Sharad and 3 others like this.

Nitish Bakshi

aasaan, saade, saral shabdon mein, itni gehari baatein !!! ab aur kya kahein.. :) :)

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Qaisar Iqbal Janjua

mauqaa paakar ,
raah badalna.........
seekh paagal,
prem karana.......
yahi hai prem.... Read More

November 9 at 5:49am · Delete

Kaynat Kousar

shukriyaa....qaisar bhaai..shukriya...nitish ji.

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Nikky Dahl

aap agar waqt ki majboorion ko naye zamaane mein prem ka andaaz kahenge to ghaliban uspar kuchh kehna mumkin nahin....yeh aapka tarz-e-zindagi hai....
zaati taur pe main samajhta hoon ke aap ki nazm aam rishton ke liye ziada theek baithti hai...ishq to ibaadat hai...usko oonche level par hi rehne do...

November 9 at 1:40pm · Delete

Riyaz Hashmi

शानदार... अब ना कबीरा दीवाना है और ना मीरा दीवानी है। मगर, प्रेम को आप यूं भी कह सकते हैं-
ये है दिल की लगी, इसको ना छेड़ो और भड़केगी।
कि पुरवाई से तो दिल की कसक कुछ और बढ़ती है।
मुहब्बत अंधी होती है, ये कुछ देखा नहीं करती।
चढ़े दरिया में लेकर कच्ची घाघर कूद पड़ती है।

November 9 at 1:56pm · Delete

Kaynat Kousar

Nikky saahab..I agree with u..lekin ..is ishq naami shay se guzarne waale har shakhs ka tajurbaa,usake ehsaasaat,doosare se judagana hote hai.koi chot khaake bhi mohabbat ke unche mayaar ko thaame rah sakataa hai,to kisi ke liye zameen kyaa..paataal bhi kam padataa hai,apane gum dafnaane ke liye.
phir bhi behtari isi me hai ki mohabbat ka mayaar unchaa rakhaa jaae. so ....is kavita par laahaul bhejate hai, aur Apse iltijaa hai...mohabbat par koi pyaaraa sa khayaal share karen.

November 9 at 3:01pm · Delete

Kaynat Kousar

चढ़े दरिया में लेकर कच्ची घाघर कूद पड़ती है...waaah........ kyaa baat hai.vaaris shaah yaad aa gae.

November 9 at 3:02pm · Delete

Nikky Dahl

baat jo dil se nikalti hai asar rakhti hai...
main hargiz ssari duniya ke liye koyi maiyaar nahi rakh sakta hai...yeh baatein bahut zaati hain...inka matalba na ho to behtar....
badnaam hai ishq,to meri jafaa se;
teri wafaa pe koi ilzaam na laye...
tu saaqi hai meri, main rind hi rahoonga;... Read More

November 9 at 3:29pm · Delete

Arun Singh

YE PREM KYA HAI MAIN TO SAMAJH HI NAHI PAYA KAYNAT....help needed..!!!:>

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Kaynat Kousar

badnaam hai ishq,to meri jafaa se;
teri wafaa pe koi ilzaam na laye...waah...saabit kar di aapki baat...aapke sher nen. gar ye poori gazal hai..to sunaaen plz.

November 9 at 5:11pm · Delete

Nikky Dahl

haan ghazal hai...shayad pichhli sadi mein likhi thi....kahin gum hai par laut aayegi kabhi na kabhi...

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Kaynat Kousar

Arun ji....mai aapki baat nahin samajh saki,,,,aap zaati taor par khudke mutaalliq kah rahe hain ya....ye kavitaa samajh nahin aai..? aap jaise zaheen shakhs ko ye bataaneki zaroorat nahin ki... ye kavita aaj ke ishqiyaanaa maahaul pe ek tanz(vyangya) hai. pls...zaraa apni baat tafseel se kahen.

November 9 at 5:16pm · Delete

Arun Singh

Zaheen...ha..ha.haaaaaaa.........bahut badi galat fahami ho gayee hai mere bare main tumhe ........ main ekdam sadharan aadami hoon, fir bhi itani izzat dene ke liye shukriya...!!! :>)

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Kaynat Kousar

zaheen logon ke sir pe maine kabi koi seeng uge nahin dekhe..aur aap hanse kyun ? matlab aap meri samajh ka mazaaq udaa rahe hai.matlab mujhe zaheniyat & jahaalat me farq pahchaanne ka shaoor nahin hai....ye hi matalab hai naa aapakaa Arun ji...?
mere gusse se aap dar to nahin gae....ha..ha..ha..

November 9 at 6:24pm · Delete

Mohammad Ahsaan

..sab se pehle taakhiir se comments dene ke liye m'uafi. masroof raha kuchh dafter mein aur kuchh bijli ka 2 ghanton se na hona.
ek cheez aur yeh ki main ''notes'' ka subject kabhi discuss nahi karta huun, sirf poetry part par hi/ us ki merit demerit par baat karna achchha lagta hai, is liye bhi mu'azrat.
khoob uksaana.......
phir ukataana.......
in lines ka lafzi dhaancha neeche ki do lines se match nahi kar raha hai... Read More

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Shahnawaz Malik

numaish to gulabo ki hai lekin
faza se bu khoon ki aa rahi hai

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Kaynat Kousar

Ahsan bhaai, aaj behad khushi ho rahi hai ki aapne apnaa farz pahchaana aur taareef ki hadon se nikal sahi salaah di..apne khayaalaat rakhe. shukriya.
lekin aakhri lines me phir mujhe khush karne ke liye aapko kyaa kuchh kahna padaa. ha..ha..ha..
sach kahoon to ye kavita..mujhe yahan publish nahin karani chaahiye thi, kyonki ye ..naa toi dil se likhi gai thi,na hi dimaag se.
sirf hamdardi thi us class met ke liye,jo nihaayat magroor qism ki ladki mashhoor thi..aur..jiska aashiq use behad emotional banaa kar kinara kar gaya thaa.
ye baat taqreeban....17-18 saal puraani hai.tab maine likhna shuru hi kiya tha...khair........ Read More

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Kaynat Kousar

ohhoo.....khoob shahnawaz bhai..khoob pakda apne isme chhipa tanz.shukriya.

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Mohammad Ahsaan

kaynat ji,,
bas aap yahaan chook gayiin,, main ne kisi ko khush karne ke liye kabhi us shakhs ki kavita/ nazm ki t'areef nahi ki. bas jitna achchha laga achchha kaha, jitna bura laga bura kaha,, waqai mein jahaan jin jaghon par yeh kavita surili thi main ne ise surila kaha ,, aap befikr rahiye.
kind regards
ahsan

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Kaynat Kousar

ji..ji.ji..mai befikra hui.
kahaa-sunaa muaaf.
Aap naaraaz hote hain kabhi ?

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Mohammad Ahsaan

kaisi naaraazgi!!!!!!???? NAMUMKIN

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Shahnawaz Malik

suhkria kaynat sahiba

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Shahnawaz Malik

roze khali haath lautkar jab ghar jata hun mai
muskura dete hain bachhe aur mar jata hun mai

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Kaynat Kousar

waah khoob kaha...mai apne bete aur shauhar ko gaaliban isi sher se guzartaa dekhti hoon aksar.
aap nihaayat umdaa likhte hain. khoob taraqqi karen..khush rahiye.

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Chhavi Joshi

kaynat ji...."ye soch kar nahin boye maine khawaabon ke darakht ki kaun jungle mein lage pedon ko paani degaa..?"

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Shahnawaz Malik

arrrr ye mere likhe huye nahi hain mam, bas is ashaar ko kitabo se nikalkar ap logo tak pahuchane ka kaam kar raha hun

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Kaynat Kousar

my god.....muaaf karen shahnawaz bhai...aur in sheron ke asal shaayar bhi muaaf karen .
shahnawaz bhai. aise sher jo aapke naa hon , aur aap unke shayar ke naam se vaaqif hon to pls....zaroor unka ziqra karen, taaki hamari jaankaari men i izaafaa ho & daad sahi jagah pahunch sake.

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Shahnawaz Malik

ji zuroor

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